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PETS三级改写句子的命题思路与解题技巧

[日期:2010-11-26]   [字体: ]
文章是通过篇章来表达思想和主题,但篇章的构建又需要词与句子作为它的基础材料。如果说主题思想是文的灵魂的话,那么句就是文的血管脉络了。脉络不通,文也就难成文了。作文时,考生一定要注意一下几条原则:
  (一)主题句原则
  一个好的主题句是文章成功的一半。不仅文章有主题,段落有纲,句也必有中心。文章失却主题,就会不知所云;落无纲,则一盘散沙,句缺中心,就无意义。所以,在立足于篇章时,一定要首先明确文的主题;在发展段落时,也要首先写好主题句。从PETS三的特点来考虑,主题句最好是置于文首或段首,这样让人一目了然! 以下就是两个实用的开门见山式发展主题句的方法。
  ●To begin with, we must attach the GREatest importance possible to this issue/fact (key word).
  ●As is well known to all, it is now high time that we took this (topic word) into serious consideration.
  (二) 句式变化原则

  好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的变化,主要是要注意两点:
  ● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
  ● 长短句结合。
  由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
  I think …  I hope…

  He does it.
  He will take it  这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:

  1.间或使用主从复句。
  Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因)
  比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.

  2.使用分词结构句。
  The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
  比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
  Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
  比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.

  3.使用不定式句。
  To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚)
  To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申)
  To do it well, you must plan it well.
  比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.

  4.倒装句
  Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
  比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
  No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
  比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.

  5.失衡句
  whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
  比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
  That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
  比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.

  当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
  ●As a creature, every one knows.
  ●Actions speak louder than words.
  ●Practice makes perfect.


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