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名师巨献:08年6月英语六级作文考前预测

[日期:2008-09-15]   [字体: ]

(一)

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Immoral Behavior in Public. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:

  1.我们经常在公共场合见到各种不道德的行为,叙述你的一次相关经历。

  2.这些不文明行为会有哪些影响。

  3.我们应该怎样改善这种现象。

  ●审题概述●

  这是一篇议论文,可以根据作文要求列出提纲:第一部分,列举不文明行为并叙述一次相关经历;第二部分,不文明行为的影响,一两个即可;第三部分,提出建议。

  【范文】

  Immoral Behavior in Public

  To witness ○1immoral behavior in public, one need only visit the Beijing subway. I still remember the first time I took the Beijing subway. It was an early morning. I was in a hurry to go to school. When I was trying to get a ticket, I found a lot of people waiting in front of me, but nobody was in the line.

  ○1Immoral behaviors in public ○2initiate a series of problems. One of the most serious ones is that it may exert a negative impact on our ○3sense of social responsibility. We will keep ignoring other people’s rights and feelings, and in turn, we too will be disrespected some day.

  The reform of○1 this phenomenon is certainly not easy. With an eye on practical ○2implementation and ○3cost effectiveness , I propose that society make it clear in every way that people who fail to respect the ④common good will be seriously punished. Stricter policies for this should be made to correct this phenomenon as soon as possible.

  We all expect “A World without Thieves". Everyone ○1shares the huge responsibility of ○2demonstrating his or her justice at the proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious socialist society.

  ◇第一段思路点评:

  作文要求第一点,相关经历

  ◇语言点提示:

  ○1 immoral behavior in public:直接点题

  ◇第二段思路点评:

  不文明行为的影响

  ◇语言点提示:

  ○1 immoral behavior in public:重复名词词组,与第一段衔接

  ○2 initiate:意思是“产生,发动”

  ○3sense of social responsibility:意思是“社会责任感”

  ◇第三段思路点评:

  如何改善这些现象

  ◇语言点提示:

  ○1 this phenomenon:指代前文“immoral behavior in public”,与上文衔接,且避免重复

  ○2implementation:意为“执行,实施”

  ○3cost effectiveness:意为“成本效率”

  ④ common good:意为“公益”

  ◇第四段思路点评:

  总结

  ◇语言点提示:

  ○1share a huge responsibility: 意为“承担重大责任”

  ○2demonstrate:意为“展现”

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